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I'm really happy with how these random guys turned out. I think each one is farther and farther along the "yeah, that dude probably knows where to get drugs" scale.
Oh, and during the stuck-in-the-elevator plotline, I had one reader mention that Jamie was "irresponsible" for evidently not carrying his phone everywhere he goes. Jamie is based on me, and I have a pathological hatred of telephones, so yeah, he doesn't always carry his phone with him. For the record, though, he's carrying it now! Yep, "Rick Bishop" is carrying Jamie Halligan's phone with Jamie Halligan's contacts. That's responsible, right?
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(Wednesday morning, EXT: alley, unnamed thug is introducing JH to a different unnamed thug)
unnamed thug 2: Yeah, yeah, I know a guy who knows a guy.
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(Wednesday morning, INT: back room of a Chinese restaurant, new thug introducing JH to a different thug)
UT3: Sure, I might know a guy who knows a guy.
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(Wednesday noon, EXT: outside abandoned warehouse, third verse, same as the first)
UT4: Mm. I know a guy who knows a guy.
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(Wednesday afternoon, INT: assorted squalor)
JH: Let me guess, you know a guy who knows a guy?
UT5: No. I know a guy who knows the guy.
JH: Ah, definite articles, now we're getting somewhere.
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